Comments on: A Blank Page (poem) http://carmelandcoco.wordpress.com/2008/06/25/a-blank-page-poem/ Anything and everything that we can think of! Thu, 05 Feb 2009 00:30:51 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: sunbloomingluver http://carmelandcoco.wordpress.com/2008/06/25/a-blank-page-poem/#comment-29 sunbloomingluver Thu, 05 Feb 2009 00:30:51 +0000 http://carmelandcoco.wordpress.com/?p=17#comment-29 :o!!! MERCI BEAUCOUP!!!!!!1 wowzers! I really appreciate the help!!! :D :o !!!

MERCI BEAUCOUP!!!!!!1
wowzers!
I really appreciate the help!!! :D

]]> By: nick http://carmelandcoco.wordpress.com/2008/06/25/a-blank-page-poem/#comment-28 nick Fri, 30 Jan 2009 01:08:01 +0000 http://carmelandcoco.wordpress.com/?p=17#comment-28 great images in this poem. I googled poems about the blank page and yours was the first one! anyways here is some constructive criticism. I would eliminate lines 2,3,4 they are cliche and dont add to the rest of the poem. also line 9 is awkward a possible solution would be " but for now, a virgin page" it would aslo add to the symetry of the poem. It ends very strong and I like the short lines. good work great images in this poem. I googled poems about the blank page and yours was the first one! anyways here is some constructive criticism. I would eliminate lines 2,3,4 they are cliche and dont add to the rest of the poem. also line 9 is awkward a possible solution would be ” but for now, a virgin page” it would aslo add to the symetry of the poem. It ends very strong and I like the short lines. good work

]]> By: Shadonna http://carmelandcoco.wordpress.com/2008/06/25/a-blank-page-poem/#comment-21 Shadonna Mon, 28 Jul 2008 04:54:07 +0000 http://carmelandcoco.wordpress.com/?p=17#comment-21 If you stab your heart with a pen, I heard creativity flows out. ..i like it a lot.. If you stab your heart with a pen,
I heard creativity flows out.
..i like it a lot..

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